What is Media?
Media is a
form of communication to provide information to a target audience through TV,
magazines, newspapers etc. there are different ways to use media, such as
informing specific codes and conventions to the target audience and entertain
that audience, so that the target audience can understand certain types of
platforms of the media text. Media can inform, persuade and influence people’s
opinions and thoughts. Media can connect people through such sources as social
networking (Twitter, Instagram and Facebook). Some web based platforms like Sky
news show audio and video which can entertain the audience. Some print based
sources like Wikipedia can be very biased because the public can go on the
website and put the information in themselves meaning that Wikipedia id
unreliable and some facts may not be the truth. Media
technology has made communicating increasingly easier as time has passed
throughout history. Today, children are encouraged to use media tools in school
and are expected to have a general understanding of the various technologies
available. The internet is arguably one of the most effective tools in media
for communication. There are other useful tools like e-mail for example which
has helped people communicate with eachother easier.
I like the end paragraph which expands on points made in the original draft. You have a nice flow to the way you write. Feels to me like it finishes a little abrupt. Sometimes its good to end with in conclusion... and sum up main points. good solid C grade.
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